Wednesday, 4 November 2015

Dialogue and script

Dialogue
Shot
“The story of Arthur Cartwright is somewhat of  unpleasant tale. It does not end happily ever after like most stories of the paranormal, but instead showcases the dangers of communication between their world and ours,  telling the story of a broken man, whose loss almost drives him to madness. So leave your rational mind and your critical thinking behind, and listen to my tale. But be warned, it is far from explanation, and even further away from a lie”. 

Arthur " Who's there show yourself, this is private property"

Amber or filler : Scream in his face and the candle goes out.



 Doctor : Mr Cartwright i'm Afraid your wife isn't well. 

 Arthur to his wife: Please just don't go, not like this.
 * Joseph and Arthur walk after visiting her grave*
Joseph : You should leave this retched place behind Cartwright, staying too long in the past is good for no mans health"
Arthur : Why can't you see I have to, this is home.

 Then cuts to Arthur sleeping and waking up to see Emily at the foot of the bed. She screams and then as he turns on the lights she dissapears.

* This is the point where the trailer starts to pick up speed, and Non-diegetic  music starts to play*

Stable man : Mr Cartwright there are certain powers on this Earth that you just don't want to meddle in*

Arthur to Joseph : Something isn't right in Cartwright manor.                                            

Arthur : " Hello? Madam are you alright
Amber : YOU DID THIS TO US.

Joseph : Dear god Cartwright what have you done




Arthur :HOW CAN I HELP YOU?! WHY ARE YOU TORMENTING ME SPIRIT
* Ollie walks topless with " hell" written on his back over and over.

To finish to the trailer there is a long shot of Arthur walking into a dark room and turning sharply round. 
 Camera starts in a close up of a hooded man, and slowly a pan away as the monologue is spoken.
-          Only a candle light to light the room.
-          An old timely book to read from.
-          The shot will begin in the pitch dark.
       As I get half way through the narration, it changes to the shot of Arthur walking through the woods with the candle

-      Cut to a shot of Arthur wandering through the woods with a candle in his hand looking scared.
     - There will be no sound apart from his feet on the ground.
     - Then someone will jump out at him and blow out the candle.
      
     * Then the studio logos roll, plus " from the twisted mind of William Hadden"


     Show a shot of Emily in a bed with Arthur looking depressed.
     

     
      Shots of them walking and talking, some over the shoulder shots to go along with the conversation.
   

   
                                                                                 
     - Shows Arthur scrabbling for the light switch close up of his face when she is gone.






       
      * Shots of Arthur reading old books by candle light* 
     - When the ghost seen occurs have objects flying around the room
    - Glass smashing

     Shows Arthur waking up to Amber sobbing curled up in the corner
     - Over the head shots of him approaching the figure 
     Then amber snaps and grabs him and the shot is from ollies shoulder 
     
     Shots of Joseph and Ollie dodging various flying objects.
     Shot of Amber charging at Joseph 
   
     - non diegetic music playing over the action shots.

      roll titles on the screen saying " Some family secrets should be buried deep"
       
     The shot follows Ollie into the room and then you only see a glimpse of Amber, and then the camera cuts to the release date.

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